Jess

Again, annoying lack of attention to details. How did Joey's face end up so scarred? Even if he wasn't wearing a helmet, crashing into the back of a car doesn't seem likely to result in major facial damage. And when he told Robbie that Geoff and Eli are partners, Robbie's response "like in business?" doesn't make sense - wouldn't that be the assumption and he'd only ask when something didn't fit his preconception? Too many things like that kept me from getting into the story.